i want the people to get entertainment out of the story
i thought the plot is pretty solid
i couldn't really get the setting set in stone
i want the reader to ask any question he wants
The sun was up and the snow was falling syrus our 14 year old protagonist is sitting in his boat in his hometown of snowtopia just one continent in the vast world of skypiea. The world is ruled by pirates. This era started 50 years ago when the greatest pirate Joll E. Roger stated before he died “if you want my treasure take it but i have given keys to my closest friend and crew, have fun” then the blades dropped. Back to the characters. snowtopia is a regular village it is a small village with a small population of 150. there is one family where our main character syrus was adopted into they are the Kidd family.
As kid was sitting at his house with no one home and then his parents came home “hey syrus how is it going’ syrus “ did you hear that there are pirates invading summerville” they said “wow thats really close to here. Wait did you hear that it sounded like gunfire” father “ Syrus look out!’ as he said that a cannonball collided with the ground only 20 feet away knocking everyone to the ground as they were getting up syrus saw a ship in the horizon it had the flag of a band of pirates called the flamingos guild. his look upon in horror to find they were invading his village. suddenly he look around to gather what was around him he saw his parents and they were on the ground he got up to help[ them but his legs won't move “MOM, DAD oh god can you hear me?” just then he conjured up enough strength to gather wear he was going he pick himself up and he heard a gunshot he look down to find the crimson red river flowing from his body he look at his parents one last time and passed out.
He awoke in a ship he thought where am i. he asked out loud “ Where am i” and he got his answer “you got lucky kid the flamingo pirates have picked you up you're apart of our crew now” he said “ NO you killed my family and then shot me why would i join you” the pirate captain “ well kidd you don't have a choice we Can either kill you or let you join” and syrus had a plan he said “ okay i will join but take me to the top deck first” the pirate captain said okay. after a short walk up the to the deck syrus jumps off the boat. in the cold ice water he swims until he can move and the just before he passed out he hit the land of an island. after he rested he woke up on a small island with trees and lucky for him he was good with his hands and he make a very small boat that he took to sail out to sea and afew hundred feet out the boat sinks